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雅思大作文写作方法

雅思大作文写作方法。作文一直是雅思考试中占分很高的题,但是有些学生一直写不好作文,下面是雅思大作文写作方法,希望能帮打你!

雅思大作文写作方法一

和开头段(Introduction)一样,雅思大作文的结尾段(Conclusion)也是非常重要的一个组成部分,很多同学往往在写作过程中会忽视结尾段落的雅思写作方法,认为是一笔带过的步骤。其实不然,雅思作文结尾段落和开头段落一般会给考官留下较深的印象,因为它们是考官看文章的第一步和最后一步,所以,我们不仅仅要在词汇、语法上保证Introduction和Conclusion中尽量不出现任何细节错误,也要在逻辑上确保它们首尾呼应,是对雅思作文文章观点进行的有效总结。

如果根据类型来划分,雅思大作文一般分为 Argumentation(辩论型)、Explanation(解释型)和Mixed(混合型)。

一、对于Argumentation辩论型的题目,一般又分为一边倒结构和对称式结构。而一边倒结构的Conclusion包括3、4个句子,主要是重申观点+重申理由或者是重申观点+写点儿别的(提出建议、希望、发起号召等)。除了要再次表明自己的立场以外,还要各种一句话来改写Body部分的各个原因段。

例如:

(1)Some people propose that smoking should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

对于要不要禁烟这个话题,我们在开头段首先已经表明了自己的看法-smoking should not be banned, 在Body部分也陈述了关于smoking的advantages: 可以增加政府财政税收(be indispensable for the government); 可以给吸烟者带来生理上的快乐(bring them psychological benefits); 以及有人认为的可能造成严重的身体疾病这种说法太夸张。因此,根据以上论点,我们可以将结尾段写成:To sum up, I believe that smoking should not be banned. The tobacco industry makes a large contribution to the government’s economy. Smoking is beneficial to smokers’ mental health. Moreover, there is no evidence showing the definite link between smoking and any fatal diseases。既重申了观点,又再次总结了理由,首尾呼应。

而关于对称式结构的结尾段写法,可以有两种形式:1. 说出自己的观点,站到某一方的立场。然后再各用一句话改写Body部分那一方的每个理由。然后还可以说点儿别的。2. 说出自己的观点,采取折中方案。认为双方观点各有利弊,应该结合起来或者分别适合不同的情况。例如:

(2)Some people hold that criminals should be sent to prison. Some others think they should do something else outside prison as the punishment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

针对这一topic, 如果最后的观点是criminals should be sent into prison, 根据Body部分描述有些人认为罪犯应该被关监狱的理由:可以为大众提供一个安全的生活环境(provide a safe living environment for the public);对罪犯来说是一种惩罚,对受害者来说则是一种精神安慰(as a punishment to the criminals and as a spiritual consolation to the victims); 以及对于潜在的犯罪分子起到震慑作用(a deterrent to the potential criminals), 我们可以总结改写原因段将Conclusion写成: After some careful consideration, I am in favor of the idea that we should retain the practice of sending criminals to prison. It can guarantee the safety of citizens. It can reduce the crime rate. Furthermore, it serves as a punishment for the merciless offenders while a comfort to the innocent victims.

二、对于Explanation解释型题目,其结尾段一般重申问题的严重性,然后写点儿别的,即提出建议、发起号召、提出希望等(不用特别具体化)。例如:

(1)It is generally acknowledged that the relationship among family members is now not as close as it used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations.

我们可以将结尾段写成:Family is the basic unit of a society and it plays a significant role in our lives. In order to enjoy a harmonious family life and maintain a stable society, we should make the efforts to create a close family relationship.

(2)Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no efforts to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to suggest individuals protecting the environment?

结尾段可以写成: In conclusion, because of the close relationship between human beings and the natural world, protecting the environment is to save our own species. Thus, the seriousness of this current issue reminds people to deal with it as soon as possible.

除了以上从大作文的主要类型上来划分,我们也可以从广义到层面上分析Conclusion部分的写法。第一种是常规模式,首先要明确结尾段的作用是归纳总结主题性质的前提下重申文章的总论点。根据下述例子:

(1)Some people think they should keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

一种具体的归纳方法是主题定性,即Conclusion部分可以写成: From the above discussion, we could find that the practice of reserving all the money one earns and refusing to pay taxes to the state benefits nobody but the people themselves at the cost of public interests; 另一种方法是重申观点,即我们亦可将结尾段写成:For this reason, on no account should such a practice be tolerated and everyone should fulfill their obligation to pay taxes as a citizen instead of trying to evade the responsibility.

而第二种则是改良模式,即专门针对双重观点讨论类话题的结尾模式。题型是 Some people believe that…, but some others argue that…. Discuss both views and give your own opinion, 这类题目要提供两种不同的观点或建议方案,对它们进行讨论。如:

My understanding of this matter is that young people working in the government are the new blood and will prove their values by making changes, but only with the help and guidance of their senior counterparts.

雅思大作文写作方法二

写作部分两篇文章的字数要求是不一样的。大作文必须完成250字以上写作任务,而小作文150字以上。根据这一指令,建议考生较为合理的时间分配为大作文40分钟,小作文20分钟。另外,大作文占写作总值的60%,小作文为40%,从这分值的权重来看,时间上2:1的分配也是相当合理的。

所以,要想成功完成大作文任务一定要把时间控制在40分钟左右,前后不超出5分钟。

那么如何充分利用这40分钟,完成一篇基本令人满意的文章呢?

步骤一:审题(3 分钟)

审题是有效完成任务的第一步,也是最关键的一步。从评分标准看,审题的正确与否与“Task Response”有着直接的联系。而在当前模板泛滥,文章千篇一律的大环境下,有效审题是突破六分的一条准绳。不少考生在审题时,要么蜻蜓点水、草草一读,要么只关注题目中词的同义转换。如此读题,都有可能对之后的文章撰写方向造成偏差。而建议考生采取的有效的读题方法应为:

通读题目,了解大意。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

由于大部分考生只作到了读题的第一步,所以出现离题或部分离题的可能性很大。以下面这个考题为例:

There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

通读题目,了解大意。

当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作,有越来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑技术越来越容易获得,也越来越便宜了。你认为这是个正面的还是负面的发展趋势?

备注:题中的accessible有不少考生不理解,对审题的准确性会造成一定影响。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

要把握题目中的句子间逻辑关系,关键是能读懂代词“this”; “it”的具体指代。

“this”是指第一句话。

“it”可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为了使文章写作方向更为明确,这里可把it 概括为:

the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying from home

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

主题词:Computer technology in working or studying from home

限定词:positive or negative

不容忽视的词:easily accessible and cheaper

题目信息解构:

(topic) positive(benefits)

Computer technology in working or studying from home

↑ (causes) Negative (drawbacks)

Easily accessible and cheaper

对题目做出如上分析,确保撰写的文章能包含以上的信息,审题这关绝对能过。

以上用时不超过3分钟。

步骤二:列大纲(3分钟)

根据以上的题目解构信息,寻找关键词的下义词和衍生词,根据已有素材确定写作框架。

如:

Computer technology:on-line, PC, laptop, broadband

Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator; journalist; writer; music composer,

artists Studying from home: on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country

Cheaper: on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB

Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB

Easily accessible : in city-- at least one PC every house

Broadband:almost every house; school

Net bar: almost every neighbourhood

Outline:

2 Introduction:

Computer technology in home-study and home- work (topic)

Positive development (opinion)

2 Body:

Benefits of studying from home:

Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)

Freer--- white collar for further education in free time

Benefits of working from home:

Artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive

Freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity

Drawbacks:

Lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)

2 Conclusion: inevitable trend( with self-discipline)

备注:在实战考试中无需把大纲写得如此详细,但胸有成竹一定会使之后文章的写作如鱼得水。

步骤三:文章撰写(30-35分钟)

一般文章为4-5段,平均每段用时5-10分钟

备注:建议考生在大作文写作时一定要写结论段,以体现文章的完整性。

步骤四:检查(1-2分钟)

此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。

雅思大作文写作方法三

和开头段(Introduction)一样,雅思大作文的结尾段(Conclusion)也是非常重要的一个组成部分,很多同学往往在写作过程中会忽视结尾段落的雅思写作方法,认为是一笔带过的步骤。其实不然,雅思作文结尾段落和开头段落一般会给考官留下较深的印象,因为它们是考官看文章的第一步和最后一步,所以,我们不仅仅要在词汇、语法上保证Introduction和Conclusion中尽量不出现任何细节错误,也要在逻辑上确保它们首尾呼应,是对雅思作文文章观点进行的有效总结。

如果根据类型来划分,雅思大作文一般分为 Argumentation(辩论型)、Explanation(解释型)和Mixed(混合型)。今天环球雅思写作专业老师时金老师就为雅思考生们带来雅思大作文结尾段的写作方法,希望能为雅思考生们带来帮助。

一、对于Argumentation辩论型的题目,一般又分为一边倒结构和对称式结构。而一边倒结构的Conclusion包括3、4个句子,主要是重申观点+重申理由或者是重申观点+写点儿别的(提出建议、希望、发起号召等)。除了要再次表明自己的立场以外,还要各种一句话来改写Body部分的各个原因段。

例如:

(1)Some people propose that smoking should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

对于要不要禁烟这个话题,我们在开头段首先已经表明了自己的看法-smoking should not be banned, 在Body部分也陈述了关于smoking的advantages: 可以增加政府财政税收(be indispensable for the government); 可以给吸烟者带来生理上的快乐(bring them psychological benefits); 以及有人认为的可能造成严重的身体疾病这种说法太夸张。因此,根据以上论点,我们可以将结尾段写成:To sum up, I believe that smoking should not be banned. The tobacco industry makes a large contribution to the government’s economy. Smoking is beneficial to smokers’ mental health. Moreover, there is no evidence showing the definite link between smoking and any fatal diseases。既重申了观点,又再次总结了理由,首尾呼应。

而关于对称式结构的结尾段写法,可以有两种形式:1. 说出自己的观点,站到某一方的立场。然后再各用一句话改写Body部分那一方的每个理由。然后还可以说点儿别的。2. 说出自己的观点,采取折中方案。认为双方观点各有利弊,应该结合起来或者分别适合不同的情况。例如:

(2)Some people hold that criminals should be sent to prison. Some others think they should do something else outside prison as the punishment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

针对这一topic, 如果最后的观点是criminals should be sent into prison, 根据Body部分描述有些人认为罪犯应该被关监狱的理由:可以为大众提供一个安全的生活环境(provide a safe living environment for the public);对罪犯来说是一种惩罚,对受害者来说则是一种精神安慰(as a punishment to the criminals and as a spiritual consolation to the victims); 以及对于潜在的犯罪分子起到震慑作用(a deterrent to the potential criminals), 我们可以总结改写原因段将Conclusion写成: After some careful consideration, I am in favor of the idea that we should retain the practice of sending criminals to prison. It can guarantee the safety of citizens. It can reduce the crime rate. Furthermore, it serves as a punishment for the merciless offenders while a comfort to the innocent victims.

二、对于Explanation解释型题目,其结尾段一般重申问题的严重性,然后写点儿别的,即提出建议、发起号召、提出希望等(不用特别具体化)。例如:

(1)It is generally acknowledged that the relationship among family members is now not as close as it used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations.

我们可以将结尾段写成:Family is the basic unit of a society and it plays a significant role in our lives. In order to enjoy a harmonious family life and maintain a stable society, we should make the efforts to create a close family relationship.

(2)Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no efforts to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to suggest individuals protecting the environment?

结尾段可以写成: In conclusion, because of the close relationship between human beings and the natural world, protecting the environment is to save our own species. Thus, the seriousness of this current issue reminds people to deal with it as soon as possible.

除了以上从大作文的主要类型上来划分,我们也可以从广义到层面上分析Conclusion部分的写法。第一种是常规模式,首先要明确结尾段的作用是归纳总结主题性质的前提下重申文章的总论点。根据下述例子:

(1)Some people think they should keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

一种具体的归纳方法是主题定性,即Conclusion部分可以写成: From the above discussion, we could find that the practice of reserving all the money one earns and refusing to pay taxes to the state benefits nobody but the people themselves at the cost of public interests; 另一种方法是重申观点,即我们亦可将结尾段写成:For this reason, on no account should such a practice be tolerated and everyone should fulfill their obligation to pay taxes as a citizen instead of trying to evade the responsibility.

而第二种则是改良模式,即专门针对双重观点讨论类话题的结尾模式。题型是 Some people believe that…, but some others argue that…. Discuss both views and give your own opinion, 这类题目要提供两种不同的观点或建议方案,对它们进行讨论。如:

My understanding of this matter is that young people working in the government are the new blood and will prove their values by making changes, but only with the help and guidance of their senior counterparts.

雅思大作文写作方法四

雅思大作文写作技巧:

1. Discuss both views and give your own opinion的考题,按照官方评分标准的求必须对两方 都进行论证,同时在结尾段里把自己的看法都提出来,要不然是会有被判成是:do not address all parts of the question

2. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 的题形式上允许更灵活,不仅能够写成是完全支持亦或是完全反对的一边倒,同时还能够写成主要支持略带反对或者主要反对略带支持的折中式,可以根据实际情况来决定采用哪一种写法更好写。

3. What is your opinion? 结尾的考题同样允许在一边倒和折中式之间任选一种态度来写。

4. Do you agree or disagree? 结尾的考题同样允许在一边倒和折中式之间任选一种态度来。 5. 一面倒对基础好的考生是很适合的,如果词汇量大与擅长写英语长句子,但是缺点是极易造成字数不够,就可以练习一下一边倒的写法;从剑桥里出来的大量范围能够看出,全部都是折中式的写法,求稳。针对大部分并未有肯定答案的问题,折中式是必须的,慎小嶷“十天突破写作”P45 范文就体现了这一点

6. 如果题目里有提到such as/for example/for instance这类举例的词组时立刻想到论证时不可以与这两个例子离得太远,对于这种举出了实例的考题,在官方评分中虽然允许适当涉及其它实例,但仍然注意不要过多地偏离题目中所列举的实例。

7. 语言地道但思维很平实是雅思写作这种语言能力测试中高分作文的鲜明特色。

8. 官方满分作文是从来不用缩写的

9. 一定别三个字成句,有耍酷之嫌,比如: nobody is perfect.

10. 举例1-2句就可以了,举例过长将会导致文章读起来像记叙文而非议论文

11. 在保证语言流畅,同时还要逻辑明确,能够把相当新颖的想法都提出来。

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