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雅思g类写作提高

雅思g类写作提高。很多考生的G类写作的水平都不是很好,该怎么提高呢?下面是小编整理的雅思g类写作提高相关文章,欢迎阅读!

高分雅思G类小作文书信类

雅思写作:简单四步把握G类书信语气 书信是G类小作文的唯一形式,但根据其内容可以分为多种类别:如投诉信、询问信、求职信、友情信、道歉信、建议信、邀请信、感谢信等。

相对正式的信件要给人一种谦恭有礼、积极合作的态度,不那么正式的信件如友情信之类应以友好自然的措辞拉近彼此的距离。在G类分数要求日渐水涨船高的今天,考生尤其要把握语气。本文,雅思老师写作组的老师将从四个方面对于如何选择合适的语气和措辞进行说明。

一、审题把握

把握好G类书信语气的第一步,就是要弄清写信的要求和背景。雅思书信写作题目就是由背景信息和写作任务两个部分构成的,我们可以将其分成私人信件和事务性信件两种类型。写给亲朋好友的信可以归为前者,如友情信,请看下面这个例子:

09.01.15

You are going to have a business trip and arrange your friend to look after your children. Write a letter to the friend. You should:

1. Tell him/her which kind of food your children like and dislike

2. Tell him/her which kinds of activities your children can attend

3. Tell him/her the time you will pick up your children.

根据背景分析,这封书信是写给朋友请求帮助在自己出差期间照管孩子的,显而易见,这是一封私人信件,由于对方是挚友,写信的语气可以比较轻松和随意,在说明详细内容时,措辞不必讲究但要礼貌。

再来看一个例子:

09.02.07

Your friends have been out on holiday and ask you to stay at their house. However, there is a problem with a piece of equipment in the kitchen. Write a letter to them. In your letter, you should:

1. Describe your feeling at their home

2. Describe what the problem is

3. Describe what action you have done to solve the problem

这是一封抱怨信,写信人在朋友度假期间帮朋友看管房屋,在信中向朋友说明厨房用具的问题,这并非商务场合和正式交涉,切不可义正词严。

09.09.05

You are living in an English-speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise everyday. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. In your letter, you should

1. say how you are disturbed by noise

2. give some suggestions to fix the problem

3. tell the owner further action will be taken if this problem remains unsolved.

这封信同属抱怨信,我们来比较一下它与上一封信的区别,这封信是写给餐馆经理的,说明对于餐馆噪声的不满,收信人与写信人并不熟悉甚至从未谋面,过于熟络的语气和措辞,或者在朋友之间使用的抱怨性较强的词汇都应尽量避免。

书信分为以下几类:询问信、建议信和求职信;一般较为正式;友情信属于非正式信件;投诉信、道歉信、邀请信、感谢信的语气要根据具体情况而定。考生需要注意题目所描述的背景和对收信人的设定,分清写信对象,准确而恰当地把握题目要求,走好G类书信第一步。

二、信头称呼

所谓称呼是指写信人对收信人的称呼用语,一般用“dear”开头,在称呼后可以用逗号(英式)或是冒号“美式”。

1. 如果是写给亲戚或是关系密切的朋友,我们习惯于在“Dear”后加上对其的称呼或是名字(given name)。如:Dear mother或者是Dear Emma;

2. 如果是写给一家公司或者不知道具体职衔的人,可以用Dear Sir or Madam或To Whom It May Concern;

3. 如果知道具体职衔但不知其姓氏,可以以其职位称呼,如Dear Chief Accountant;

4. 如果写信人知道收信人的姓名和性别,但关系不够密切,只属于一般往来,Dear Mrhttps://www.engpx.com/yszx/Mrshttps://www.engpx.com/yszx/Ms/Miss Wang会显得友好却不随便;

5. 另外,也可以用学位及职称加上姓氏或者全名,如Dear Dr. Will Smith, Dear Prof. (Professor) Jane Austin。

三、语气斟酌

正文作为整个信件内容最重要的部分,所选用的词汇和句式无不体现着写信人的态度和语气,应该根据不同的信件内容进行挑选和斟酌。

1)投诉信

投诉信的收信对象可以是比较熟悉的人,如抱怨邻居宠物过于吵闹,也可以是针对公司甚至不熟悉的机构或者某个事件而写的,如对社区体育设施的拆除表达不满。

You heard that a sports center would be closed. Write a letter to the manager. In this letter, you should:

1. Tell how you heard about the news.

2. Say what your opinion is about it.

3. Explain how it impacts your life.

由于对象是某运动中心经理,措辞方面就应该较为礼貌,以下的词句是可以选取作为陈述问题的句型:

I am writing to you to complain about...

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...

There are some problems with … that I wish to bring to attention.

值得注意的是,也完全没有必要像公文那么正式,只要言语恰当就可以。在叙述问题时可以多以客观性描述为主,辅以主观的感受,显得更有说服力,如:

I found …

I feel quite disappointed that…

在结尾部分说明期望时,也可以搭配同样的语气:

I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.

I sincerely hope that it will review its management system, with the view to providing, better service to the public.

We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.

如果是针对邻居再三出现的已经提醒过很多次的问题,我们可以措辞更为非正式一些,如I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more. 但也不意味着可以出现“guy”等过于口语风格化的语句。

2)工作申请信

G类考生许多都是有工作经验的人,或者曾经有过写工作申请的经历,由于收信人多是公司或者经理级的人,言辞之间应该以正式语气为主:

I wish to apply for the position of…which you advertised in…

I am very interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining a position as … with your company.

结尾部分在阐述希望约见进行面试时,也选取一些较为缓和语气的动词如“hope”来表达:

I am available for an interview every afternoon. Please contact me at…

I hope that after reviewing my enclosed resume you will kindly give me an interview so that I can elaborate on my studies and working experience.

雅思G类小作文写法

重点考察能力:

1.engage in personal correspondence

2.elicit and provide general and factual information

3.express need and wants, likes and dislikes

4.express opinions, complaints, etc.

首先,G类小作文对考生最主要的要求就是合理联想,理论联系实际,这时候需要考生脑洞大一点,想象下实际情况来做描述。我们以常见的投诉信为例,题目要求只会给出主体内容,比如对旅行社的投诉,那么考生在雅思写作的时候其实需要去设想特定场景,有些考生会思维比较局限,比如单单描述导游的态度问题,这个时候问题来了,理由不充分且内容不充实。换句话讲,小作文更加看重的是效果,如果最后读了你的信件,让考官觉得理应得到赔偿,这其实就达到目的了。

所以,我们在写作的时候,一定要把理由想充分,比如我们可以从旅行安排与合同不符,比如过多的购物环节,这其实在跟团旅行中很常见。再比如住宿环境差或者餐饮问题,其实衣食住行都可以包含进去。这样再去投诉提要求才会显得比较合理。同时,在信件的开始,要介绍清楚自己,投诉事由及当时感受等等。写清楚例如时间,地点,对象,内容等等。当然,最重要的最后一段,要把自己的诉求,建议,期望写清楚。比如希望得到赔偿或退换部分旅费,有关部门作出相关调整避免再次发生,或者要求道歉。但切记不要提过分无理的要求。

其次,在保证格式的基础上,不能降低对行文的要求。有些考生的误区是,移民类,对书面语的要求较低,行文要求也随之降低。实则不然,首先参考的考生想要的分数集中,想要在这些人中保有优势需要一定的基本保障,这就是格式和基本行文要求。在格式方面遵循书信基本格式就可以,注意开头和结尾的 写法很重要,这是体现表达地道与否的关键部分哦。如开头的称谓一般使用“dear”开头,加上名字(given name)或直接写成Dear Sir or Madam或To whom it may concern等,在称呼后用逗号。签名处的落款也有一定的要求,如果在称呼处用的是“Dear Mr.”等,我们习惯在此处用“Yours sincerely”,如果是称呼“Dear Sir or Madam”,我们一般就会用“Yours faithfully”结尾。如果和收信人关系较为亲密,Yours, With love等甚至直接留下名字都是可以接受的。

当然啦,不同的信件写法不同语气不同,所用的词汇也不尽相同,各位考生要充分了解各类信件的特点,找准格式摸清重点,随机应变~

雅思写作G类小作文备考攻略

这不是图表题,但这是小作文!

G类的小作文绝大多数都是以书信形式展开的,这一形式本身决定了它与A类小作文有着很大的区别。但仔细分析一下题目,基本万变不离其宗,下面以剑9的一道题目为例来进行题目分析。

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

Explain why you want to take time off work

Give details of the amount of time you need

Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

首先,作文题目会给出一个情境,也就是要写这封信的事由和目的。紧接着,题目用小标题的形式给出了三个要求,也就是书信必须要讲清楚的三件事情,告诉大家要写什么。这样清晰的题目提出的方法,给审题降低了很大的难度,也为评分标准之一的“人物完成”减轻了很大的负担,因为大家只要就着这样的要求一一回应就可以,而非像A类图表题一样还要动很大脑筋去想该写什么内容才能比较好地回应任务。

一段答一条,就这么简单!

条理清晰的问题提出方法,也为文章的结构指出了一条明路。大家只需要为题目中的目的介绍和三个条目分别安排一段即可。在顺序上,如果有进行自我介绍的要求(如果有,一般出现在三个条目的第一条),就将自我介绍和写信目的写在第一段,将剩下两个条目分别写一段。

信件结构轻松搞定,现在来关心一下格式问题。首先,地址是不需要写。开头称谓顶格写,有时试卷会给出完整的称谓,有时只给出“Dear…”。如果没有给出称谓,我们采取的方案就是以下两种中的一种:根据情境的要求,如果完全不认识收信人,写上“Dear Sir/Madam”;如果认识收信人,就来给收信人编一个名字吧,例如“Dear Jack”“Dear Mr Green”等。注意称谓结束用一个逗号。主体段的各段都顶格写,每段之间空一行。落款的祝福有很多种写法,通用的方法是“Sincerely yours”顶格写,后面接逗号。而后空一行留下名字,同样,名字也给自己编一个,不要用真名,写个“Mary”啊“Tom”啊都可以。

充分想象,编剧你来当!

具体的内容上,请充分发挥自己的想象力,基于题目中的情形来设计一些细节。

下面拿剑6的一篇考官范文举例,看看好文章是怎样大摆龙门阵的:

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am your tenant from Flat 3 on Riverside Street. We met each other when I signed the rental agreement in your office.

I have lived here for months now and I am writing to complain about some of the furniture. As you may remember, the dining table is in very poor condition and has uneven legs. It also does not match the dining chairs as there are too low to be comfortable for a table of that height. When I first pointed this out to you, you agreed to provide a brand new dining set. However, you have not done so and I would really like to resolve this matter as soon as possible.

If it is more convenient for you, perhaps you could simply replace the table by finding one of a suitable height for the chairs. This would solve the problems without too much cost, so I hope you agree to this proposed solution.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

M.M. Egil

作文解析

正文首段的地址和见面场景,以及第二段中对家具状况的细致说明,都让人感叹,这厮编得跟真的一样呢!仔细分析这是怎么做到的呢?两个字:细节!细节出画面,画面出真实,请大家多多动用生活积累,开动脑筋,设计出合情合理的细节来。

看完了怎样写的方法论,接下去的一大挑战也许就是语言本身了。在这一条上,虽然网络有很多实用句型可以参考,但也还是希望大家提早准备,更多地注重语言基础而非考试技巧。毕竟,参加G类的雅思考试不仅是为了一个达标的分数,更是为了预备出国生活而进行的集中学习机会呢!

雅思G类大作文范文

Task:Some people think all children should learn to paint and draw at school, but others think it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

参考范文:

People hold divergent opinions about whether students should attend painting and drawing class at school. Some people believe it is beneficial for their development while others argue that it costs too much time.

Some people may hold the viewpoint that students are already under enough pressure with their academic study, which has a direct relation with their future development. Subjects like math and science requireamounts of time and numerous efforts. And on top of attending these classes every weekday, they have to do homework, preparing for the exams. Only when students have excellent school performance, can they enter top universities, which is not only the goal of the students, but also the expectation of most parents.

However, just acquiring academic knowledge is not enough for students to cope with the challenges in the future and sometimes some other skills are also required in the real-world tasks. Painting and drawing is a perfect way to encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration. If students are equipped with these skills through painting and drawing class, they will have an advantage over others who do not attend this kind of class in many tasks, such as writing a short story.

In conclusion, from my point of view, although it may take some time for students to learn painting and drawing, it will contribute to their future development in the long term. And in this sense, this practice is worth encouraging.

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