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雅思作文开头怎么写

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雅思作文开头怎么写

任何英语考试中的写作,难的无非是无从下笔,不知面对考题该说些什么。在雅思考试中,许多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态。下面小编告诉你雅思作文开头怎么写,大家一起来看看吧!

雅思作文开头怎么写:

要素一:现象句

雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。

E.g. 1

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount of

E.g. 2

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school

同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven

E.g. 3

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

主被动之间的转换,以及同义替换:finish high school = graduate from high school

所以,从上文中可以看出,一般来说,现象句会在最开始加上一个套句,并且加上地点和时间。

雅思大作文开头段经典套句:

1.It is true that... ...是真实的

2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…

3.It is quite common… …是常见的

4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的

5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的

6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的

地点:in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place

时间:in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

要素二:点到问题

雅思大作文考题分成两种:report & argumentative。

对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

E.g. 4

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

What do you think are the cause of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来,全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。

E.g. 5

Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

Why is it difficult to define?

What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点,把造成这个现象的原因大致导出,与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。

对于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion. ; is it a positive or negative development?),这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点,所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。

雅思写作开头段写法:

很多同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化趋势,我们先来看一道2012年的真题:

Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town. While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

拿到这个题目,不少烤鸭笔下的开头是这样的:

Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town , while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.

不知道有没有同学“躺枪”,写这种开头的同学,分数绝对不可能高于5.5,整个开头几乎可以说是在“自杀”,除了套模板,就是照搬原题,考官拿到这种开头是绝对不会有好印象的。 那真正好的开头是什么样子的呢?好的开头又好在哪儿呢?我们一起来研究一篇剑8的TEST1中剑桥考官的给出的范文,先来看一下题目:

Some parents think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官范文的开头是这样的:

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

从这篇考官范文的开头,我们不难看出,它并没有模式化的“社会背景引入---提出正方观点---再提出反方观点---最后陈述自己观点”,而是只作了两件事

一:给核心名词下定义。

在本文中,即是给child’s education下了个定义,谈了一下在作者看来,child’s education是什么样的。

二:表明观点或立场。

在本文中,即阐明孩子的教育问题不仅仅只关乎家长。 所以,好的开头可以“无模板,但有逻辑。” 翻翻剑桥雅思考官的范文,我们会发现很多考官在开头段都只干了两件事:下定义+ 表明观点,或者是引出背景+表明观点,甚至很多考官只干了一件事,即引出背景,仅此而已。

万能雅思大作文开头:

一:名人名言

有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!

原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?

经典句型:

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)

更多经典句型:

As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

二:数字统计

原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to

further their study after their graduation.

看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:

Honesty

根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth

根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型:

A recent statistics shows that …

雅思写作开头句型分享:

1、我们的生活已离不开…

We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone).

2、我们随处都可以看到…/使用…

(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere.

(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere.

3、…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。

(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend.

There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas).

4、越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…

More and more people are choosing (to study abroad).

More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel).

5、…已经不再罕见

It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas).

It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home).

6、人们开始意识到…

People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship).

7、在几十年前,…很少有人会想象到…

Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly due to the use of Internet).

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