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如何写雅思小作文

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如何写雅思小作文

如何写雅思小作文?在雅思写作部分有一篇小作文,给了考生20分钟去完成,有些学生觉得时间有点少,不足以完成,如何写雅思小作文呢?我们去看看!

如何写雅思小作文一

第一种类型的数据图属于常规题型,按照有无时间因素分为静态图和动态图两种。写作框架一般为“改写题目”“比较高/低值文字描述+数据支持”“其他变化较小(包括不变)信息+数据支持”“总结明显趋势(2-3个,注意不要出现数据)”,一般而言3-5段就够了。

题目的改写可以做名词替换如information/data,也可以转换动词短语show information on /provide data about/compare....in terms of....

上升:rise to/grow/increase.... substantially/significantly/enormously(表示剧烈上升)

下降:decrease/diminish/go down....

相似趋势:similarly/likewise/ the same/also/at a similar level

相反/对比趋势:in/by contrast/on the other hand/by comparison/in marked contrast to/in comparison with...

倍数:double/twice/triple/treble/twofold/threefold

动态图选择数据:数据起点和终点(第一年);比较高值和较低值

静态图选择数据:比较高值和较低值

流程图一般分为描述产品生产和生物生长两类,对于产品生产类的文章,一般较多地使用被动语态(一般现在时),然而对于生物生长这一类,则主要采取主动语态进行描述(因为涉及时间,所以会涉及到一般现在时和一般将来时)。流程图分段标准为“改写题目”+“步骤一”+“步骤二”+“步骤三”+“总结”。

常用流程图固定搭配:

The process starts from...

At the first/initial/second/ stage,

At the beginning,

In the final stage/phase,

Overall/In summary,

地图题应强调地点方位和现在过去的对比,如果出现过去的时间,使用一般过去时态,没有的话则使用一般现在时为主。地图题分段标准为“改写题目”+“描绘过去时间的情形”+“对比并描绘现在时间的情形”+“总结”。

常用地图题固定搭配:

located in...

situated in...

from the east to west,

from the south to the north,

adjacent to.https://www.engpx.com/next to.https://www.engpx.com/close to...

in the/close proximity to...

如何写雅思小作文二

第一、完美四步走

第一步:改写题目

在考场上,时间是最宝贵的,当考生拿到作文题目,第一件事就是改写题目,也就是说小作文的第一段就是改写题目,考生可以通过同义词转换在短短的1分钟内就写好作文的第一段。

举一个例子,The graph below shows the percentage of people unable to find work in three major countries from 1983 to 1992.

题目中划线的单词都可以进行同义转换, graph—figure, show—illustrate, percentage—proportion, major—key, from…to…—between…and…, 因此考生需要在日常学习中多多积累同义词,有助于更加快速准确地进行同意转化。

第二步:分析时态

1. 图表小作文大部分时候使用过去时态,因为出现的数据一般都是以往的统计数据,过去的情形和现在的情形很有可能完全不一样,因此用过去时态比较恰当。

例句1: In the 2002 survey, over 75% of respondents with annual incomes above$ 100,000 considered leisure time extremely or very important.

2. 如果图表里没有出现任何以往的年度,或者显示这是过去的统计数据,那么用一般现在时比较理想。

Britain produces 3% of the world’s carbon dioxides emissions----about the same as India, which has 15times as many times as many people.

3. 少数情况下,图表作文会出现预测值,这个时候用将来时态。

第三步:分析图中数字的含义以及单位

很多同学由于急于完成文章,所以忽略了对图中数据的分析,比如说,有些题目中会在角落里标明百分号和单位,很多同学没有注意到,就认为图中的数字是表示的个数或者弄错单位,这样整篇文章的分数就会受到很大的影响,因此先不要急于动笔写,先分析好了,再动笔也不迟。

第四步:通过分析图表来确定主体段落需要描述哪些信息,并标注在图表上

建议考生在写作时,第一句话总结图中比较显著的趋势或者特征,其余句子按照第四点中所规定的顺序逐句叙述图表内容。主体部分每一个句子一般有三个组成部分,分别是文字信息、数字信息和比较。很多考生习惯在作文中把数字逐一读出,这是不好的习惯。事实上,文字信息比数字信息更为重要,文字信息可以让读者清楚了解图表的主要信息,而数据只是起辅助的作用。比较下面的句子:

例如:The average US family had 4.5 people in 1915, 3.3 in 1967 and 2.6 in 2006.

改后句子:

二、图表作文范文

曲线图:

The graph below shows the percentage of people unable to find work in three major countries from 1983 to 1992.

学习知识点:“上升和下降”,“平稳波动的说法”

1). the proportion (percentage) of people who were unable to find work decreased from 13% in 1983 to 8% to 1990.

2). The number of people unable to find work showed a significant decline, accounting for 8% in1990, compared with 13% in 1983

3). after 7 years of steady decline, the percentage of people unable to work started to rise.

The line graph shows a comparison of unemployment rates in Japan, the United Kingdom and Canada between 1989 and 1992.

In Japan, the percentage of unemployment increased from 2.3%to 3%between 1983 and 1986. After that, the percentage started decreasing with minor fluctuation and returned to the original value in 1992.(第一组:具体谈日本的变化趋势,起末点,比较高较低)

In 1983, the percentage of unemployed people was 12% in Canada and 13% in the UK.(起点)These values decreased dramatically and at a constant rate over the next few years.(趋势)Unemployment reached the lowest percentage in Canada with about 7.7% in 1988-1989, and in the UK with 7% in 1989-1990. (较低点)(介词短语的并列形式)The unemployment rates of the two countries reaches the same point between 1988 and 1989. And then the figures(替换)started increasing in both countries. In 1992, Canada reached its original value. Meanwhile, UK reached 10%, three points below the original percentage in 1983. (终点)

From the above analysis, the unemployment rate in Japan was more stable than those of UK and Canada.(结论)

柱状图:

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1950, 1970, and 1990.

The bar chart represents a contrast in terms of bus, car, bike, foot in years of 1950, 1970 and 1990.

From 1950 to 1990,the percentage of people who travel(替换)by bike and on foot decreased from 27% to 7% and 33% to 10% respectively. Similarly, the percentage of people taking bus dropped after 1970 but increased before that. However, car’s percentage use sharply boomed(增速迅速发展)year after year.(第一组:柱自身比较)

Traveling by bike or on foot was most popular in 1950, but percentage of car users was far smaller. After two decades, with the decrease of bike users and travelers on foot, bus and car gain a lot of popularity. Bus reached its peak at 27%. In 1970, over one out of three(替换)people drive to and from work.(替换第二组,柱间比较)

All in all, as the economy increases gradually, people prefer to go to work and come home by driving rather than taking bus or walking.

表格图:

The table below shows information on income, taxes and prices in five cities around the world. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

This table graph demonstrates a comparison of wages, taxes and rents in five important cities, Athens, Geneva, Hong Kong, London and Tokyo.

Geneva and Tokyo offer the highest average hourly wage, 13 and 12 pounds respectively. Within expectation, the tax as percentage of wage is also high. However, the rent in Tokyo is much more than that in Geneva.

On the contrary, the lowest wages are offered by Hong Kong and Athens, 3 and 4 pounds respectively. It is not surprising that the taxes are correspondingly lower than the rest. The difference between the two cities is the rent, with the lowest 700 pounds in Athens and higher 2400 pounds in Hong Kong.(第二组:工资比较高,相似和不同)

With the average rent and wage, London has the highest tax.(其他有特点但未提到的)

In conclusion, in terms of living cost, living in London might harder than the others.(合理推断)

饼状图:

The two pie charts below show the types of communication used in 1962 and 1982.

The two pie charts demonstrate a comparison in different patterns of communication which were used in 1962 and 1982.

As what has been shown in the two charts, the percentage of letters drastically decreased from 50% in 1962 to 10% in 1982 respectively.

The figures of phone and computer usage, on the contrary, increased correspondingly at a high rate. The percentage of computer communication in 1982 was exactly twice that in 1962. Similarly, the popularity of phone in 1982 can also be suggested by its rise-25% from the original value, 35%.

In conclusion, communication devices, as economy and technology are being enhanced, have changesgreatly. High-tech ways will gradually take the place of private and traditional ones.

如何写雅思小作文三

词汇的背诵

这个毫无疑问,大家都非常清楚,比如说上升的词我们可能会背诵很多如:increase、rise、climb、grow、recover等等。但是每一个词的用法大家也要清楚,例如recover,它是不能在图表一开始上升的时候用的词,因为它的本意有恢复,重新赢得之意,所以,像这样的问题,大家在使用的时候还是要特别注意的,否则在考官看来就会有歧义。

另外,我们还要考虑其他词汇的多样使用,即不要反复的用同一个词汇,例如,一篇文章中讲到中国留学生的问题,我们可以用overseas student,也可以用the Chinese students going abroad for higher education这个分词做定语,当然也可以用the Chinese students who go abroad for higher education这个定语从句来做。

总之,词汇应用一要注意多变性,二要注意准确性。

句式的掌握

小作文句式的背诵与掌握是非常重要的。举个简单的例子,比如说我们想表达A在B方面从哪一年到哪一年急剧增长,那么这个时候我们就需要牢牢记住我们至少可以用两种句式来做,也就是一个是副词修饰动词:A increased dramatically in B from …to …,另一个就是用名词形式,我们用there be结构:There was a marked growth in A from …to …

除此之外,我们在大作文当中用到的句式多样性,在小作文当中同样使用,有的同学觉得小作文比较简单,字数也不多,所以不假思索的全部用简单句来写,这同样是不可取的。全部用简单句会给别人很急促、节奏太快的感觉,所以不论是大作文还是小作文我们都应该长句短句交替进行。

写作的重点

小作文写什么,这是很多考生头疼的一个问题。题目中会有大量的数据,这个我们根据题目的要求去做是最直接的解决办法。题目中会有这样的要求:Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 也就是说我们所需要写的是图表的主要特点,另外再需要比较的地方就一定要进行比较。掌握了这一点,再辅以我们的练习,我想在写作内容和重点的选取上我们就不会有太大的问题了。

4数据的使用

小作文最明显的一个特征就是在图表型文章中会有大量的数据,我们除了要把它的主要特点趋势写出来,还要注意数据的引入。因为这类文章是说明文,只有你自己的说明文字,没有相关数据的引入,同样显得没有生气、缺乏说服力。

5段落的分配

很多同学小作文得6分可能不那么难,但是得6.5或7分就有很大的难度,笔者认为段落的分配是起很大作用的,当然要保证你在以上四点都有很好的表现。我们非常清楚,小作文主要分三部分:开头段、主体段、结尾段,这是一个大纲。在主体段部分,如果你能根据具体的图表情况,把它有所组合,那么说明你在分析题目、分析数据的能力上要胜人一筹。也就是说,你可以根据具体情况,把变化形势相同或相近的放到一起去写,进行重新组合,这样的话,胜算就要大一些。

总之,在小作文的写作上,考生同样不可忽视,把握好以上的几个方面,希望对大家能够有所帮助。

如何写雅思小作文四

一、关于雅思小作文的介绍

雅思写作分为两个Task,Task 1就是我们通常所说的“小作文”,要求学生根据题目所给出的各类图表和数据写一篇不少于150个单词的小短文,时间为20分钟。

二、常见困难

1. 没有写作思路:

中国考生每当看到图表题的时候,第一反应就是无从下手,要用短短的150字尽可能多的描述出图表中的信息是需要一些高度概括写作技巧的,很多考生在考试中无法抓住需要表达的重点。

2. 顺序混乱:

图表是一个帮助人们让条理清晰的一种手段,但是很多考生在写小作文的时候会出现逻辑不清的情况,导致描述出的信息点出现跳跃,让考官产能疑惑。

3. 时态问题:

写小作文的时候时态是考生容易出现错误的部分,很多时候,学生开头用了过去时,写着写着变成了一般现在时。通常情况下小作文的时态要根据题目当中的时态来写,例如:题目中用的都是过去的时间点,那么小作文中应该使用一般现在时。

3  三、解决方案

1. 对于没有写作思路的学生来说,第一步要先看题,找出关键词,然后再看图。第二歩要学会改写题目,通过改写题目的主旨句细化信息,第三步,才是开始描绘图表。

2. 对于容易出现逻辑思维不清的同学来说,每个图表的写作方法和思路有所不同,拿饼状图为例:

一个饼状图通常会分为多份,当饼图分为3至4份时,只要从大到小(或从小到大)按照顺序描述即可。当分为5至6份时,可以挑选两个较大值,两个最小值,再看是否有相同值。当分成七份以上时,则写一个较大,一个最小,相同值以及同类比中相差较大或最小的部分。柱状图也可采取这种选取较大值,最小值和相同值的方式。

但写曲线图的时候需要注意一点,曲线图必须要关注起点值,因为曲线图的小作文很注重顺序,就是说尽量要从左到右挨着写,若在曲线图上面的信息点很多的情况下,可以忽略一些细节信息,主要描述出一个趋势,从哪儿到哪儿为上升部分,从哪儿到哪儿为下降部分,哪里是持平的部分即可。

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