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雅思大作文如何写

雅思大作文如何写?很多人都不会写雅思的大作文,雅思大作文如何写呢?大家跟着小编去看看吧!

雅思大作文如何写一

要想成功完成大作文任务一定要把时间控制在40分钟左右,前后不超出5分钟。

那么如何充分利用这40分钟,完成一篇基本令人满意的文章呢?

步骤一:审题(3 分钟)

审题是有效完成任务的第一步,也是最关键的一步。从评分标准看,审题的正确与否与“TaskResponse”有着直接的联系。而在当前模板泛滥,文章千篇一律的大环境下,有效审题是突破六分的一条准绳。不少考生在审题时,要么蜻蜓点水、草草一读,要么只关注题目中词的同义转换。如此读题,都有可能对之后的文章撰写方向造成偏差。而建议考生采取的有效的读题方法应为:

通读题目,了解大意。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

由于大部分考生只作到了读题的第一步,所以出现离题或部分离题的可能性很大。以下面这个考题为例:

There are more workers to work from home and more students to study fromhome. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessibleand cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

通读题目,了解大意。

当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作,有越来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑技术越来越容易获得,也越来越便宜了。你认为这是个正面的还是负面的发展趋势?

备注:题中的accessible有不少考生不理解,对审题的准确性会造成一定影响。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

要把握题目中的句子间逻辑关系,关键是能读懂代词“this”; “it”的具体指代。

“this”是指第一句话。

“it”可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为了使文章写作方向更为明确,这里可把it 概括为:

the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying fromhome.

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

主题词:Computer technology in working or studying from home

限定词:positive or negative

不容忽视的词:easily accessible and cheaper

题目信息解构:

(topic) positive(benefits)

Computer technology in working or studying from home

↑ (causes) Negative (drawbacks)

Easily accessible and cheaper

对题目做出如上分析,确保撰写的文章能包含以上的信息,审题这关绝对能过。

以上用时不超过3分钟。

步骤二:列大纲(3分钟)

根据以上的题目解构信息,寻找关键词的下义词和衍生词,根据已有素材确定写作框架。

如:

Computer technology:on-line,PC,laptop,broadband

Working from home:Fashiondesigner;freelancer;translator;journalist;writer;music composer,

artists Studying from home:on-line course,the disable who are difficult tomove;course in the foreign country.

Cheaper:on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB

Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB

Easily accessible:in city-- at least one PC every house

Broadband:almost every house;school

Net bar:almost every neighbourhood

Outline:

2 Introduction:

Computer technology in home-study and home- work (topic)

Positive development (opinion)

2 Body:

Benefits of studying from home:

Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)

Freer--- white collar for further education in free time

Benefits of working from home:

Artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive

Freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity

Drawbacks:

Lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)

2 Conclusion: inevitable trend( with self-discipline)

备注:在实战考试中无需把大纲写得如此详细,但胸有成竹一定会使之后文章的写作如鱼得水。

步骤三:文章撰写(30-35分钟)

一般文章为4-5段,平均每段用时5-10分钟

备注:建议考生在大作文写作时一定要写结论段,以体现文章的完整性。

步骤四:检查(1-2分钟)

此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。

以上就是怎样写好雅思大作文的全部内容。值得注意的是在本篇论文中,笔者花了较多的篇幅来论述审题和列大纲,旨在引起读者对这两部分的足够重视。所以希望大家能够引起重视,认真备考雅思写作。最后,祝大家考出满意的雅思成绩!

雅思大作文如何写二

雅思的评分标准已经详细地描述了对于连贯与衔接(Coherence andCohesion)的要求。只要我们尽量依照这个标准写文章,就能较大程度地提高文章的流畅度。

9l uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention

l skillfully manages paragraphing

8l sequences information and ideas logically

l manages all aspects of cohesion well

l uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately

7l logically organize information and ideas; Clear progression

l A range of cohesive devices appropriately in spite of some under-/over-use

l Clear central topic within each paragraph

6l Arrange information and ideas coherently; a clear overallprogression

l Uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or betweensentences may be faulty or mechanical

l may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately

l uses paragraphing, but not always logically

5l present information with some organisation but there may be a lack ofoverall progression

l make inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices

l may be repetitive because of lack of referencing and substitution

l may not write in paragraphs, or paragraphing may be inadequate

连贯与衔接涵盖了四个方面的考量:

1 有逻辑有条理地组织论点

一篇文章只有一个立场,但是论点可以有几个。那么这几个论点如何排列,哪个在前哪个在后呢?这些是有讲究的,同学们不能想到哪写哪儿。下面的段落是学生的例文,其中就存在论点排列的问题

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under nocontrol, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on theirstudies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. Ifyou allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So,studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

这段文字的中心内容是网络学习存在的问题。论点包括两个,学生的自律和网络的内容。关于学生自律的问题有两句话,young people cannotconcentrate on their studies for hours,以及 If you allow your kids to learn onlyvia the internet, they will play allday.这两句话有相关性,但是却被网络那句话隔开了。这样会给读者造成阅读的障碍,降低文章的流畅度。所以重新调整这几句话的位置,就可以很快解决这个问题。

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under nocontrol, it will be terrible. Young people cannot concentrate on their studiesfor hours. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will playall day. And the information online can be good and bad as well. So, studyingwithout a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

2 连接手段使用得自然多样

论点之间如何连接?有哪些连接手段?下面这个段落的中心内容是看电视太多产生的问题,共有三个论点。所使用的连接手段是正确有效的,但是单一,少变化。每一个论点之间都使用了副词做连接词,而且都是在句首。

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is badfor children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weakbody. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would haveless opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to theirfeeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least,watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV isconsidered as inactive activity by many researches.

下面的段落是对照版本。其中使用了代词,副词和形容词等多种连接手段,而且做到了自然衔接:

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obviousone is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, theytend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about socialdevelopment of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they wouldhave less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to theirfeeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV toolong may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactiveactivity by many researches.

3 段落的中心内容与中心句

一个段落只有一个中心思想,这个中心思想通常会体现在一个总结性的句子当中,这句话叫做中心句。中心句在学术文章中常常落在段首,以方便阅读。中心句如同射击的靶子,要直指文章主题,这样后面的论点才不会偏离题目,因此非常重要。上面关于看电视太多的段落,中心句就写的非常明确。下面再给同学们一些句子,可以灵活应用于立论段,即证明自己观点的段落。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ firstbeneficiaries of this working fashion.

There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.

Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind morethan mass media.

The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.

A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable formany.

However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些可以用于让步段的中心句:

there are certainly some minor downsides in 。。。

I admit that … is not perfect.

I understand why some people oppose 。。。

Of course there are some opposite voices against 。。

the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.

It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a futurejob…

the other side of the argument is also valid.

Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense forparents.

You cannot be honest without admitting ….

4 指示代词的准确使用

中文和英文在指示代词上有较大的区别。中文习惯重复名词,而英文则强调用代词。如‘我今天把钱包丢了,我那个钱包可好看了。’而相对应的英文表达是使用代词而不再重复钱包这个名词,‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was socute.’流畅度高的文章指示代词使用正确,指向清楚。下面这两句话当中有两个代词it,但是存在指代不清的问题:

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attentionto. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support theathletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一个it指代后面whether从句,后一个it指代government.为了理清关系,减少模糊,比较好不用形式主语这个句型,而是直接把主语从句放在主语的位置上。修改如下:

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether itshould support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causescontroversy.

以上是雅思写作评分标准中关于连贯与衔接的具体要求和应用举例。同学们按照这几个标准多实践,多体会,就会逐渐写出如行云流水一般的文章。

雅思大作文如何写三

一、利弊分析

09.1.17 Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and workanywhere they want, because of the improvement of the communication technologyand transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh thedisadvantages?

此类题目中常有利弊字眼,或者在指令部分提出进行利弊对比分析,常见词如“advantage, benefit,usefulness(好处);disadvantage, drawback,limitation(坏处)等”,考生只需对题目细节进行把握,弄清主旨,再构建“好处”—— “坏处”的主体部分,列举观点。

该题主要就“人们可以随意选择生活和工作的地方”的现象进行讨论,考生可多联系社会现状,总结利弊即可。

相似考题:

2010.2.20 Most countries want to improve standard of living througheconomic development, however, others think social value is lost as a result. Doyou think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

二、补充说明

09.2.28 Some people believe that the best way to improve public health isby increasing the number of sports facilities. Others think that this has littleeffect and other measures are required. Discuss both views and give youropinion.

此类题目特点十分突出,一方面有“the only, themost…”等强调字眼,另一方面提出“other”的其他观点,细想之下,后者似对前者的补充,主体段可先对前者进行承认,但不要承认其绝对性,为后文做好铺垫,在论述另一方面时,主要使用列举法进行说明。

该题是对“如何提高公众健康”的措施进行讨论,首先可分析建设体育设施的好处所在,再列举一些其他有效措施,便可以达到两面兼顾又不至于偏颇的目的。

相似考题:

2010.2.6 Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Theordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To whatextent do you agree or disagree?

三、对立比较

09.1.15 Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessonswith teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet, television). Towhat extent do you agree or disagree?

此类题目的特点是:两方面在某种层面上属于对立关系,可以分别讨论其利弊,以达到比较的效果。就该题而言,“跟老师学还是从其他资源上获得知识”是个老话题,分别讨论教师的作用和其他来源的好处,进行对比便是应对此题的比较好办法,有时双方互为优劣,仅提及好处即可。

相似考题:

2010.2.11 Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence onthe world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatestinfluence. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

四、分类说明

09.4.30 Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract andentertain young people. Others think the purpose of museums is to educate, notto entertain. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

这类题目常让考生觉得棘手,两个方面似乎都有道理,但处理不好又会“搬起石头砸自己的脚”,前后论述自相矛盾。这个时候,如果能够对题目进行分类说明,便豁然开朗。

该题主要讨论的是“博物馆的功能”是教育还是娱乐,科技、自然博物馆及一些主题博物馆如杜莎夫人蜡像馆都是属于后者,而历史、军事乃至革命博物馆就有前者意义。

相似考题:

09.5.21

A hundred years ago, people think that human race is steadily improving inevery area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areasdo you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do youthink we still need to make progress?

针对这四种类型的分析方法,考生可利用历年真题进行分析练习,做到“胸有成竹”,在下笔之前有个清晰明确的脉络,做到“事半功倍”。

雅思大作文如何写四

雅思大作文写作技巧1、列数据(raising figures)

句型:

As is reported/ investigated/ researched, …

It is reported that …

A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that…

列数据的写作方法较讲道理更有说服力,但是这就需要我们在平时生活中多做积累才能应付列举考试中出现的各个话题的一些相关数字。

雅思考试中的数据其实可以分成两大类,一类是有科学依据的,明确记载的数据,如一些新闻事件,四川地灾、公交车自燃等的死亡或受伤人数,这些都是**询的,如若考生对这些数据没有切实的把握就不需列举。另一类是指一些调查报告的数据,如大学生平均一天花多少时间自习,初中生平均一天花多少时间玩电脑游戏等,这类数据无据可依,考生完全可以自己根据论证内容给出数据,但一定要符合逻辑。我们通过一例来使用列数据的雅思写作方法:

Eg.The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

要对这样一个topic sentence做列数据的扩展,我们首先要找到可列数据的点,此题有两处,一是退休老人的年龄,二是所花时间。结合上述句型,得出论证过程如下:

As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day.

雅思大作文写作技巧2、比较(contrast &comparison)

在雅思大作文的写作中,考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比较,相同关系叫对照(comparison),相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词:

In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas

Likewise, similarly

雅思大作文写作技巧3、引用(quotation)

在雅思大作文写作论证的过程中,表达一些观点的时候,如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力,说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致,形成共鸣的。但引用要求考生要有相当大的积累,由于备考时间紧迫,此类论证可以少用。此外,老师提醒考生要紧记,引用名人名言就意味着引用别人的观点,所以只要引两到三句起到论证自己观点的作用的话就可以了,点到为止,而不是中文写作中,引用越多越好。

雅思大作文写作技巧4、让步(making concession)

让步的论证是中国考生较陌生的一个概念,其实在学状语从句时,我们就学过让步的关系,先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实,再转折给出自己的观点,否定前者。句型如下:

Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that …

As is granted/ Admittedly, …

Opponents would argue that …

举个简单的例子,一个男生向女生告白,被女生拒绝,她就会委婉的用让步的论证来表达自己的想法,她会先承认男生的一些优点,再转折说自己并不喜欢他。这样既能表达自己的观点,又不至于伤害对方。让步这种方法的优点为能较全面的看待一个问题,而且反驳更能有的放矢。具体例子如下:

Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.

这个Topic sentence的观点很明确,存钱在当代社会不是好主意,显然,用让步论证的话,我们要先承认存钱的优点,再根据所列有点进行反驳。

As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits.

以上就是雅思写作大作文中经常会使用到的四种写作技巧,对于论证很有帮助,作用是展开论述方面的信息,非常实用。大家在备考自己的雅思写作考试的时候,通过一段时间的练习,就可以掌握这个技巧了。

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