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雅思大作文同一话题不同问法

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雅思大作文同一话题不同问法

在这么多的题目当中,细心的考生就会发现,有些题目是非常相似的,那么在撰写文章的时候就很有可能会写偏。如果想知道雅思大作文同一话题不同问法,不妨接着往下看……


雅思大作文同一话题不同问法

1.比较好不要中间三段。有个雅思作文改卷官说,考场上,五段式容易写得很好或是很差,但是四段式(开头结尾各一段,中间两段)就能稳妥不少,考官看得也舒服一些。考题说的give your own opinion实际上不是要你单独写一段自己的opinion,你可以先写一段你不支持的观点,然后第二段写这种观点存在弊端,你支持另外一种观点,原因是……这样就可以结构十分严谨了。如果分三段的话,你比较好能提供有别于前面两种观点的看法,千万不要和前面的重复,不然也会被视作结构混乱。

2.你确定考题会这么出么?我记得雅思出第三种的比较多……anyway,如果这么出题的话,你记得你的观点已经被定为是agree的,不要说你disagree就行。同样是四段论,中间第一段称述为什么agree,第二段反驳那些disagree的观点。你说的分两三段,每段一个原因,可以,但是要很小心,因为你这样写就是一边倒的方法了,一边倒写好了高分,如果老外觉得你论据不足逻辑不清晰,OOPS,完了……

3.这种跟第一种其实是完全一样的。所有这三种,都不建议写中立的。语文作文,中国学生习惯中立,但是外国人思维非常严谨,是就是是,不是就不是,写中立,他们容易觉得你没主见逻辑不明确。但是,不乏那些语言组织能力非常强的,能把中立写好,我只是觉得不必冒这个险。

看似一样实则不同的雅思大作文题目

题目一:

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

题目二:

Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others believe there are other factors. Discuss the two sides and give your opinion.

这两道题目都涉及到一个关键词,即happiness。但是当我们仔细去分析题目的时候,你就会发现这两道题目有着本质上的区别,不能混为一谈。

从题材上来看:

这两道题目可以说是属于抽象类题材,这一类话题就好比在雅思口语考试中的抽象类话题一样不容易回答,考生还是要多做准备。也许,会有考生觉得这是属于社会类题材下的题目,当然,具体怎么看待这个问题,我们要有自己的划分标准,自己能够分辨出来就行。

从题型上来看:

我们都知道,雅思大作文题型主要有三大类,即观点类,讨论类,问题解决类。这是大作文题目常常涉及的三类题型,各自问法也有所不同。然而,除了这几类之外,还有一种就是混合类。混合类,顾名思义就是题目的问法不止一个,而是有两个或两个以上的问法,但大多情况下为两个。这就和雅思小作文中的混合图有一样的道理。

在剑桥雅思真题的大作文中,混合类也有那么几个,如C4T2、C7T3、C10T1。考生可以多多了解一下。那么,我们就来看看上面的两道题各属于哪一类。第一道是混合类,考生不仅要指出幸福难以定义的原因,也要分析获得幸福感的因素;第二道是讨论类,一些人认为个人幸福与经济上成功有关,另一些人认为还有其他因素影响。对于这个观点,考生要进行双边讨论。

从写作思路上来分析一下:

第一道题目,文章结构可以写成五段,首段可以先指出背景,引出话题;第二段指出幸福感难以定义的原因;第三段是让步段,指出幸福感与身体,环境安定等等有关,但没有这些并不意味着就不会幸福。同时,也为写下一段进行铺垫;第四段指出获得幸福感的最关键的点是什么,也就是指明自己的中心观点;最后一段是总结段,重申观点。

第二道题目,文章结构可用四段式,第一段同样是背景介绍,引出话题;第二段可以论证一个人的物质幸福依赖于经济上的成功,尽管不是完全依赖;第三段指出一个人经济上的成功不一定就能获得精神层面的幸福,也就是论述获得幸福感的因素除了经济上的成功之外还会有其他因素影响,并不是唯一因素;最后一段为结尾段,总结全文,突出观点。

当然,除了这么写作之外,若是考生有更好的写作思路的话,不妨可以练练手, 润色一下,使得自己的文章更加出色。

雅思大作文高分范文解析

Friendsand family bring more happiness than money and possessions.

Howfar do you agree with this statement?

Key words analysis

family: 家庭,也可表示家庭成员

possession: 财产,只所有所拥有的财富

Argument:

这是属于议论文中的argument类型,通常会在agree或disagree之间进行选择。但是该题特别提到说how far do you agree or disagree,那么我们比较好是能够讨论到这个事件的两个方面,然后给出自己的意见。

Possible reasons:

财产可以带来安定的生活,是快乐的基础

财产也可以彰显个人的成就,是一种荣誉的代表

只有财产却不一定会快乐,要有朋友和家人分享

Model Essay 1 – Part 1

Introduction

Everybody wants to be happy, but there isoften a debate over what makes a person happy. Some people believe happinesscan only come from friends and family. According to other people, happinesscomes from money and possessions. I believe that happiness comes both fromclose family and friends and also from having enough money and possessions.

Main body 1

Firstly, everybody needs enough money tolive - to pay for a home, food and other necessities. If people have money tospare after paying for these things, they often spend money on possessionswhich make them feel happy for a short time. However, this kind of happinessoften does not last because money and possessions alone cannot bring happiness.Rich people can be very lonely if they don’t share their money and possessionswith others. It has also been proved that having a good time with friends andfamily brings more happiness than a fast car or new clothes.

Model Essay 1 – Part 2

Main body 2

On the other hand, very poor people are notusually happy, even if they have large families and many friends. Money worrieswill cause them a lot of stress and this will mean they are not able to enjoylife. Their friends and family may be able to support them and help them bylending them money, but this may lead to problems. I agree that family andfriends are important, but without a good income, they may not be enough.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I believe that both moneyand possessions as well as a family and friends are important to happiness andthat neither is more important than the other. People who don’t have enoughmoney to live but who have good friends and a strong family may be just asunhappy as wealthy people who have more than enough but no family or friends toshare it with.

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