雅思作文第一段怎么写

无论是大多数考生备考雅思的过程中，还是从历年来雅思考试四项的中国考生平均分，都可以反映出中国考生在雅思写作方面的薄弱。很多考生不知道如何开头，下面小编告诉你雅思作文第一段怎么写，大家一起来看看吧!

雅思作文第一段怎么写：

1). 追根溯源法。即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题，考生要尽量在考前做练习，这样在考试就可以得心应手了。

请看下面的例子：

There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? (高分范文P76)

这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone，所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑，就是科技的繁荣，而科技的繁荣，手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末，这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写了。如

… (time) witnessed …

这个背景句就可以写成： The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

再看一例：

Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?

这题要求大家讨论大学是提供职业技能还是传授知识。那从传统观点来看，大学是传授知识的地方，为什么会提出要传授技能呢，所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下，大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了，所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。那当然还是要结合句型，这里可以用as 引导的原因状语从句。

参考：As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

2). 重述法。即对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。

请看一例：

Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。

本题的话题关于压力，那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题，考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况，即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型。

参考: It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from

雅思作文如何撰写开头段：

要素一：现象句

雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。

E.g. 1

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of

E.g. 2

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school

同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven

E.g. 3

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school

所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。

雅思大作文开头段经典套句：

1.It is true that... ...是真实的

2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…

3.It is quite common… …是常见的

4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的

5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的

6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的

地点：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place

时间：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

要素二：点到问题

雅思大作文考题分成两种：report & argumentative。

对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

E.g. 4

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

What do you think are the cause of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来，全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。

雅思写作开头段写法：

头篇

很多同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化趋势，我们先来看一道2012年的真题：

Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town.While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

拿到这个题目，不少烤鸭笔下的开头是这样的：

Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town , while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.

不知道有没有同学“躺枪”，写这种开头的同学，分数绝对不可能高于5.5，整个开头几乎可以说是在“自杀”，除了套模板，就是照搬原题，考官拿到这种开头是绝对不会有好印象的。 那真正好的开头是什么样子的呢?好的开头又好在哪儿呢?我们一起来研究一篇剑8的TEST1中剑桥考官的给出的范文，先来看一下题目：

Some parents think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官范文的开头是这样的：

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

从这篇考官范文的开头，我们不难看出，它并没有模式化的“社会背景引入---提出正方观点---再提出反方观点---最后陈述自己观点”，而是只作了两件事

一：给核心名词下定义。

在本文中，即是给child’s education下了个定义，谈了一下在作者看来，child’s education是什么样的。

二：表明观点或立场。

在本文中，即阐明孩子的教育问题不仅仅只关乎家长。 所以，好的开头可以“无模板，但有逻辑。” 翻翻剑桥雅思考官的范文，我们会发现很多考官在开头段都只干了两件事：下定义+ 表明观点，或者是引出背景+表明观点，甚至很多考官只干了一件事，即引出背景，仅此而已。

雅思写作怎样获得高分：

考官青睐有逻辑的风格

写作其实很注重逻辑分析，条理清楚的文章更为考官青睐。

作文是写作解说文性质的书面产出，不同于一般的记述，除了要把其中的数据表达出来，更重要的是要进行分析。有部分同学将小作文写成纯粹的数据罗列，也就是我们常说的一锅粥，是不可能得高分的。

写作的时候除了要把题目给出的信息写全之外，还要注意用词的准确和用句的得当，要用好的语言把整篇作文组织成有条理、有逻辑的文章，如果单单只是把题目给出的东西写下来，没有逻辑的文章是不能打动人心的。

精彩的作文开头

俗话说：好的开始是成功的一般。好的作文开头也是雅思写作中很重要的一个环节，一般在评分的时候，考官看到的是你的作文开头，如果你的开头能令考官眼前一亮的话，你拿高分的几率就上升了。

很多考生拿到作文考题都不知道如何动笔去写开头段，有的会把题目原封不动抄下来，但如果这样做，在统计作文字数时，第一段就不被统计在内了。

作文的第一段是情景铺垫，建议考生在这一段要点明这篇文章要讨论、解决什么问题及问题的背景。作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面：

1. 场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon。

2. 一些人的观点(some people’s opinion)，这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。

3. 个人观点，这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。

在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段比较好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。

雅思写作的套路和辞藻

并不是词汇量少就一定写不出高分文章。考试时不要刻意的去追求词汇多样化，熟练准确的运用单词比生拼硬凑好单词更重要。

雅思作文的评分标准里有一项是关于词汇要求的。这一点不仅包括词汇多样性，更包括词汇的准确使用。所以对于平时花了大把时间去背单词的同学来说，不但要能认识，而且关于它的用法，词性和拼写也需要熟练掌握，这是雅思写作中必备的条件之一。

雅思作文更重要的是你有没有切题的观点，有没有清晰的文章结构(这反映了你的思路是否清晰)，在保证这两点的基础上再去思考词汇的出色应用才是正确的选择。没有这两点词汇再好也白搭.这就象建房子, 如果你压根不知道要建一座什么样的房子(观点是什么),不知道房子的结构应该怎么搭建(结构怎么安排), 你手中有再多的砖块(词汇)也没用。