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雅思的作文语法

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雅思的作文语法

雅思的作文语法。想要写好雅思作文,掌握语法是很重要的事情,下面是小编整理的雅思的作文语法,欢迎阅读!

雅思写作中的五大易错语法

1、第一易错点错误:Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.

错误分析:可数名词不可“裸用”。

在正式英文写作里,凡是常规的可数名词,必须在前面有限定词,比如冠词 a/an/the,物主代词 my/their/your 等等,指示代词this/that 等等。否则,这个可数名词就必须用复数。

在这个句子中,government要么用the government,要么用government,后面的teacher和student都一样要加上复数。

正确:The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.

2、第二易错点错误:Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

错误分析:动词原形不能作主语。

而且在这个句子中如果work做了动词,后面can enhance也是动词,就出现双谓语的情况,因此把work改成working.

正确:Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

3、第三易错点错误:Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.

错误分析:词性使用错误。

different的词性为形容词,而修饰形容词或者动词的时候应该用副词。

正确:Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.

4、第四易错点错误:A lot of houses were collapsed in the earthquake.

错误分析:句中出现双谓语

句中 collapse已经为动词,再加be动词之后就变成了被动结构,此处be纯属多余。

正确:A lot of houses collapsed in the earthquake.

5、第五易错点错误:Letters were the most important way of communication in the past , e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.

错误分析:这个句子的句型并不属于简单句、并列句或者复合句中的任何一种的定义。

因为出现了两套动词,因此我们可以将这个句子变成并列句,而前后两句之间是对比关系,所以我们可以在中间加对比连词或副词,比如while。

正确:Letters were the most important way of communication in the past while now e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.

虽然雅思的作文并不要求大家做到语法全对,但过于低级的语法错误,也会直接影响我们的作文成绩~

雅思写作中包含的语法知识点

虚拟语气:

英语中的语气分为陈述语气、祈使语气、虚拟语气三类。虚拟语气用来表示假想,而不表示客观存在的事实,所说的是一个条件,不一定是事实,或与事实相反。虚拟语气通过谓语动词的特殊形式来表示。

1. If sb had done sth (坏事), sb would never have done sth (好事).

如果某人过去做了某事(坏事),那么他永远不可能做某事。

If Hugh Miller, after toiling all day in quarry (采石场), had devoted his evenings to rest and recreation, he would never have become a famous geologist.

2. Sb would never have done sth (好事1) , never have done sth (好事2), if sb had done sth (坏事)

某人永远不可能做某事,永远不可能做某事,如果某人过去做了某件坏事。

The celebrated mathematician, Edmund Stone, would never have published amathematical dictionary, never have found the key to science of mathematics, if he had given his spare moments to idleness.

3. Had sb done sth(坏事) ,sb would never have done sth (好事)

如果某人过去做了某件坏事,而不是去做某件好事,那么他永远不可能做某事(好事)。

Had the little Scotch lad, Ferguson, allowed the busy brain to go to sleep while he tended sheep on the hillside, instead of calculating the position of the stars by a string of beads, he would never have become a famous astronomer.

对以上几个虚拟语气的应用范文:

Group discussion Google

If Google had ignored the importance of group discussion, this high-tech company would never have achieved today's stunning success.

(If sb had done sth, he would never have done sth)

Google, a once obscure, ailing / fragile company, would never have achieved today's stunning success, never have conquered so big a market share, if it had ignored the importance of group discussion.

(sb would never have done sth , never have done sth , if sb had donesth)

Had Google , a once small , obscure company , ignored the importance of group discussion ,the hi-tech tycoon would never , never have harvested today's overwhelming success . (压倒性的成功)

情态动词:

情态动词本身有一定的词义,但是不能独立作谓语,只能和行为动词一起构成谓语。情态动词用在行为动词前,表示说话人对这一动作或状态的看法或主观设想。 情态动词虽然数量不多,但用途广泛,主要有下列: can (could), may (might), must, need, ought to, dare (dared), shall (should), will (would) must not.

雅思写作中关于情态动词的使用经常存在漏用和误用的情况,而大作文本身就是要求写对某个事物或者现象的评价,所以不可避免要出现带有情态动词的观点句。下面是发现的比较常见的问题:

首先是情态动词,尤其是Will的漏掉。

中国考生受汉语影响,一提到“将来”才会有意识地用will, 实际上will可以表达“能、将、会、要、就”等多种意义。只是涉及到这样的地方很多考生就把这几个词当作虚词忽略掉了,以至于经常出现“观点”与“事实”不分的句子, 如:

Riding bicycles reduces air pollution.

如果没有情态动词,这个句子就只表示目前存在的状态或者事实,而不表示个人对骑自行车的评价。

其它的常见的漏用还体现在与if引导的状语从句一起连用的主句中,so that或者in order that引导的从句,或者是与without, in case of等介词短语连用的主句,不论条件还是目的都是写作中经常出现的句式。如:

If I have time tomorrow, I drive to pick you up.

Xiao Zhang gets up very early so that he catches the earliest bus to work.

Without enough time to stay inside campus, college students don't have time to improve themselves.

其次是情态动词“can”的误用。

分析认为主要问题是中国学生在亮观点时对“can”情有独钟,而英式的学风历来讲究严谨,像can这样语气过于绝对的表达比较好换成may/ will, 或者是语气更委婉的might/would probably等,同时还要搭配一定程度的副词,如:

Over indulgence in computer games can lead to social violence especially of teenagers.

上句中can不如might用起来更加客观,因为几乎每个小孩都玩游戏,但绝不是每个人都会犯罪。

另外一个容易误用的词是should。

多表示根据社会风俗习惯个人的责任,而在比较正式的议论文写作中,多数句子是以客观事物做主语的,所以用should就有些不太恰当,如:

To tackle the problem of youth crimes related with computer games, advertisement enterprises should restrict the large-scale promotion.

一般我们会用另外一个更客观性的短语be to do来代替,或者是shall,但是这里的shall不是用于第一人称后的将来时符号,而表示的是一种情态。

至于must, 因为语气实在强硬,所以一般在社会性的问题的论述上我们要慎用,建议考生可换成need/ shall/ be to do或者是be expected to do形式。如:

To help students get better employment, universities must increase the skillful courses.

虽然情态动词不是关系写作是否能上6分的语法项目,但也会在一定程度上影响到分数,所以希望考生们能引起足够的重视。

雅思写作常见7种语法错误

雅思写作语法致命伤 1. 双谓语错句

e.g. For those under 26, there were 80% students study for career.

There be句型属于双谓语错句高发句型,因为句中的be动词已经是谓语,而句子后面的动词通常是定语从句中的成分,故不能作为主句中的谓语。例句中同时出现了“were”和“study”,根据上面的分析,were应该是谓语,而study for career应该是定语从句,因此,例句应修正改成:

For those under 26, there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26, there were 80% students studying for career.

又如:Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.应改成:

Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.

雅思写作语法致命伤 2. 句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主语是the most popular kind of transport,谓语动词(系动词)是was, 而by road按照语法应该是方式状语,此句缺乏表语。应改成:

The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如:Many factories in order to get more profits, which made waste water and waste gas.

去除目的状语“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定语从句“which made waste water and waste gas”, 剩下的是many factories, 不能作为一个句子。根据此句想表达的意思,应改为:

Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.

雅思写作语法致命伤 3. 主系表结构使用错误

e.g. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主干结构是:we are impossible“我们是不可能”,表意不对。这种表达在英语中对应的句型是:It is…for…to…, 所以应该改成:

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

类似的错误例句还有:People are very convenient to get information on the Internet. His profession is a teacher.

雅思写作语法致命伤4. 情态动词后的动词原形和动名词的使用出错

e.g. Another equally vital point to be considered is that building them may costs much money and energy.

这种错误可能是笔误,在雅思作文中偶尔出现不至于扣分,但是通篇都是这样的错误,那么肯定是有影响的。

e.g. Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

“花更多时间在电脑上”这个动词短语作为主语应该要用动名词形式:

Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

雅思写作语法致命伤 5. 标点符号用错

e.g. As far as I am concerned, people should take exercise and relax themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.

Because引导的句子做原因状语从句,既然是从句,那么前面就不应该使用句号使其独立成句,而应该改成逗号,because首字母小写。

雅思写作语法致命伤 6. 词性使用错误

e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介词,而这里构成to do(不定式),只能用动词。因此,可改为:

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

e.g. Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which leads to that they suffer great mental pressure.

Lead to 中to 是介词,后面不能直接加句子,因此可在leads to后加一名词,构成同位语从句:

Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which leads to the fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which makes them suffer great mental pressure.

雅思写作语法致命伤7. 从句的误用和滥用

e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定语,固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句连用,气势磅礴,这就是所谓的高分句型。

e.g. In this essay, I will discuss what those, who are two kinds of people in this topic, are how to think and how to choose. 实再迂回婉转,不知所云。

关于to的雅思作文语法讲解

不定式(to do)一般是指将要或者以后发生的事情,而介词(to doing or to something)往往是指一个现有事实或者状态。

1 Pay attention to, contribute to, lead to, give rise to 这些都是接一个现有事实,to后面要加名词。

例:Teachers today pay attention to bullying and other behavioural problems.

2 the solution to, the approach to, the key to, the answer to 都是表示方法和措施的一些名词,后面往往接一个现有的问题,或者事情。

例:we want a solution to environmental problems.

3 当说到intention, plan, wish, obligation, responsibility 等名词的时候,阐述的是一个以后要做的事情,用不定式

例:we have the obligation to help vulnerable students.

4 当说到动词choose, attempt, want, desire, prefer的时候,也是要加不定式,表示要发生的事情

例:we prefer to read real books, rather than e-books.

5 使用important, essential, vital等词的时候,相对来说就复杂点

如果主语是一个物体的时候,一般是to后面加名词,因为指代的是一个现有事物

例:a good diet is essential to health.

如果主语是形式主语it的时候,一般to是不定式,因为指代的是一个目前还没发生,需要发生的事情

例:it is essential to have a good diet every day.

这句话的翻译是“每天吃好是很重要的。”,类似于一个建议,而目前有没有吃好不清楚。

包括其他的一些词,important, vital, helpful 等,如果主语是it,都是表示建议。

It is important/vital/helpful to have a good diet every day.

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