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雅思小作文柱状图技巧

雅思小作文柱状图技巧。很多考生都不会写雅思小作文柱状图技巧,下面是小编整理的雅思小作文柱状图技巧,希望能帮到你!

雅思小作文柱状图写作经验

柱状图的写作重点无非就是数据的描述,一般可以分为两种情况,就是根据每个组里的柱子的个数,有单柱子和多柱子。

第一种情况,单柱子。这种情况好写,就是分别说一下就可以了,如果是以时间为横轴的话,就写一下趋势,如果是以组为横轴,则直接写。

第二种情况,多柱子。这个情况比较麻烦,数据少比如每个组里就两个柱子,可以全写,如果数据比较多,比如每个组里有六个柱子,那就取几个较大或者最小的就行,也就是说在比较的过程中想要拿到想要的结果就要找对比鲜明的那一对就对了。把对比最鲜明的几个柱子描述清楚,其他的可以一带而过。

注意:对于柱状图,数据太多,则起点,结点和数量相等点必写,倍数点必写。这是因为这些点都是非常有代表性的点,分析这些点就可以基本看出这些柱状图分析的主要结果了。

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雅思小作文图表类如何构思

构思基本原则

由于在这一类的图表作文中存在随时间变化而变化的数据和信息,因此,我们在进行这类图表作文的构思时,需要把握一个基本的准则,也就是应该根据时间的推移对数据点进行描述,也即是说,从初始点的描述开始,随着时间的推移,逐一描述进程中的关键信息点,直至终止点。例如,如果在图表中出现1950-2000的变化趋势,则应该从1950年开始描述,并逐步向后推移直至描述到2000年的信息点。

何为关键信息点

上一点中我们提到了随时间推移需要对关键的信息点进行描述,那么哪些才是所谓的关键信息点呢?一般来说,起始点和终止点的描述是必不可少的,其次,图表中出现的极值点(较大最小值),拐点(变化趋势出现转变的数值点),峰值(常常可以用类似“在某个时间段内出现的第几个峰值”的表达来描述)和图线的交叉点也都是可以具体描述的信息。

如何合理的安排信息点

在确定了可以描述的信息点之后,考生往往会遇到两个难题,有时候图表中可描述的对象很多,如果一一详细描写一则时间不允许,二来也会造成文章的重心过多,因此需要考生对信息点进行筛选和取舍;另一种情况为图表中可描述的信息极少,简单进行数据的描述无法完成题目的字数要求,这种情况,就需要考生选取重点信息进行多样化和详细化的描述。这一点考生可以参考笔者“数据类图表构思必杀技”一文,文中对如何进行繁简信息量的处理有详细的描述。

“文字”和“数字”

在确定文章的内容后,对于每一个信息点的描述,都由三个部分组分,即对信息点特点的文字描述,具体数字的体现和与相关信息点的比较,考生切忌在行文过程中仅仅关注数字的录入而忽略了能够让读者清晰了解图表内容的恰恰是另外两方面的内容。我们通过下列两组句子能够对这一问题有很好的体会。

EXAMPLE 1

原句:The energy demand in the year 1990 was 3.5 energy units and it increasedto 20 units in the year 2000.

修改后:The energy demand in the year 1990 was relatively low, 3.5 energyunits, but it experienced a rapidly increasing trend during the next 10 yearsand reached the peak of 6 units in 2000, almost 6 times over the 1990 level

原句的表达在语法上没有任何的问题,但是因为没有对数据点进行特征和比较的描述,所以对于读者而言,仅仅只是枯燥的数据罗列,并没有很直观的概念。而在修改后的描述里,我们将起始点的特点“relativelylow”,终止点的特点“the peak”,以及两者的比较“almost 6 time over the 1990level”有效的加入进来,从而更形象和直观化的将信息展现给读者,同时,使文章的表达更具特色。

EXAMPLE 2

原句:The US population is 15 million in 1990, 20 million in 1995 and 40million in 2000.

修改后:The 10 years from 1990 to 2000 witnessed a growth of the US populationfrom 15 million to 40 million, while increase in the second half of the decadewas much more dramatic, 20 million in a mere 5-year period.

同样的,原句的表达没有任何的错误,但是单纯的描述三个年份的人口信息无法给读者带来直观的印象,而修改后的句子在其中加入变化趋势等信息,同时还体现出了“后五年的增长幅度更快”这一特色信息。

上述四点即是“与时俱进”类图表作文在构思的过程中四个必须注意的事项,相信考生在把握了这四大原则之后,一定能够很好完成这类文章的构思任务。

雅思范文:柱状图作文参考

The bar chart compares the proportion of employees of both genders employed in executive positions in ACNE Oil Company within a one-year period between July 1993 and June 1994.

As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of male employees generally increased with the rise of the job categories from Grade E to Grade A while the opposite was true with that of women.

When it comes to Grade B and C, men also took up over half of the employees, accounting for 80% and 60%, which are 50% and 10% higher than that of women respectively.

To sum up, on the rank ladder of ACME Oil Company, male employees took up a higher and higher proportion than the weaker sex as it gradually went up to the peak -------- Grade A.

雅思小作文柱状图写作范文

The bar chart shows how much money was spent on fast foods per week in the UK over a span of 20 years from 1970 to 1990 while the graph reveals the trend of fast food consumption over the same period of time.

从柱状图看,各收入阶层在汉堡和鱼煎薯条这两种快餐上的支出相对高于在皮萨上的消费;曲线图反映出汉堡与皮萨的消费呈现上升趋势,鱼煎薯条则呈现出波动趋势。

As we can see from the chart, the weekly expenses of people of different income levels on hamburgers and fish and chips were relatively higher than that on pizza. The graph indicates that while hamburger and pizza consumption both revealed a general trend of increase, fish and chips showed a trend of fluctuation.

首先,高收入阶层和中等收入阶层每周在汉堡上的平均消费分别是每人42便士和33便士,比低收入阶层的14便士搞出了很多。在鱼煎薯条方面,高收入阶层的支出略低,是17便士,但中等及低收入阶层的支出都分别达到了25便士和18便士,相对于在皮萨方面支出的12便士和8便士高出了很多。值得一提的是高收入阶层在皮萨上的消费高于鱼煎薯条2便士,为20便士。

First, the weekly average expenses of high-income people and middle-income people were 42 pence and 33 pence respectively, a lot higher than that of low-income people which was 14 pence. As for fish and chips, high-income people spent relatively less, only 17 pence, but the expenses of middle-income and low-income groups reached 25 pence and 18 pence, much higher than their expenses on pizza which stood at 12 pence and 8 pence respectively. What is worth mentioning is the amount of money spent on pizza by high-income people which showed only 20 pence, 2 pence more than their expense on fish and chips.

第二,从1970年的每周平均85克开始,人们在汉堡上的消费缓步增长到了1975年的100克,然后,消费量加大增速,到1983年左右已经达到了200多克。接下来,我们看到的是更强势的增长,到1990年达到了图表上的比较高峰550克。

Second, starting from averagely 85 grams per week in 1970, people’s consumption of hamburgers gradually grew to 100 grams in 1975 and was then followed by a faster growth, reaching more than 200 grams in around 1983. From then on, the growth gained a stronger momentum, hitting the peak across the board at 550 grams in 1990.

第三,皮萨的消费趋势与汉堡相仿,也是很明显的三个增长阶段,但是增幅没有汉堡那么大。1970年至1980年,皮萨的消费从平均每周40克慢慢增长到80克;1980年至1985年,增长加快,从80克增加到了130克;1985年至1990年,增幅加大,从130克快速增长到了280克。

Third, the consumption of pizza revealed a similar trend of growth as that of hamburgers and could also be clearly cut into three periods, though the growth rate was not that fast. It rose slowly from 40 grams per week in 1970 to 80 grams in 1980 and then grew faster from 80 grams in 1980 to 130 grams in 1985. From 1985, the growth rate was even faster and we see a big increase from 130 grams to 280 grams.

第四,鱼煎薯条的消费趋势在波动中呈现了三种状态。1970年至1975年一直是缓慢的下降,从平均每周300克降至280克;之后,从1975年至1985年,下降速度稍有加快,从280克降至200克;自此,开始逐渐回升,到1990年攀升到了240克。

Fourth, the consumption of fish and chips showed three changes in the general trend of fluctuation. From 1970 to 1975, it dropped slowly from the original 300 grams per week in 1970 to 280 grams in 1975. Later on, from 1975 to 1985, it dropped a little bit faster when it fell from 280 grams to 200 grams. From then on, it began to rise gradually and till 1990, it had climbed back to 240 grams.

总之,英国人在上述所提及的三种快餐方面的消费在图表所标识的二十年里都发生了或增或降的某些变化。

To sum up, the consumption of the three above mentioned fast foods in Britain showed certain rises and falls as illustrated in the chart and graph over the designated 20 years.

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