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雅思大作文写作的方法

雅思大作文写作的方法。雅思的作文一直以来都是一道难题,下面是小编整理的雅思大作文写作的方法,欢迎阅读!

雅思大作文写作的方法

步骤一:审题(3 分钟)

审题是有效完成任务的第一步,也是最关键的一步。从评分标准看,审题的正确与否与“Task Response”有着直接的联系。而在当前模板泛滥,文章千篇一律的大环境下,有效审题是突破六分的一条准绳。不少考生在审题时,要么蜻蜓点水、草草一读,要么只关注题目中词的同义转换。如此读题,都有可能对之后的文章撰写方向造成偏差。而建议考生采取的有效的读题方法应为:

通读题目,了解大意。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

由于大部分考生只作到了读题的第一步,所以出现离题或部分离题的可能性很大。以下面这个考题为例:

There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

通读题目,了解大意。

当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作,有越来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑技术越来越容易获得,也越来越便宜了。你认为这是个正面的还是负面的发展趋势?

备注:题中的accessible有不少考生不理解,对审题的准确性会造成一定影响。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

要把握题目中的句子间逻辑关系,关键是能读懂代词“this”; “it”的具体指代。

“this”是指第一句话。

“it”可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为了使文章写作方向更为明确,这里可把it 概括为:

the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying from home

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

主题词:Computer technology in working or studying from home

限定词:positive or negative

不容忽视的词:easily accessible and cheaper

题目信息解构:

(topic) positive(benefits)

Computer technology in working or studying from home

↑ (causes) Negative (drawbacks)

Easily accessible and cheaper

对题目做出如上分析,确保撰写的文章能包含以上的信息,审题这关绝对能过。

以上用时不超过3分钟。

步骤二:列大纲(3分钟)

根据以上的题目解构信息,寻找关键词的下义词和衍生词,根据已有素材确定写作框架。

如:

Computer technology:on-line, PC, laptop, broadband

Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator; journalist; writer; music composer,

artists Studying from home: on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country

Cheaper: on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB

Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB

Easily accessible : in city-- at least one PC every house

Broadband:almost every house; school

Net bar: almost every neighbourhood

Outline:

2 Introduction:

Computer technology in home-study and home- work (topic)

Positive development (opinion)

2 Body:

Benefits of studying from home:

Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)

Freer--- white collar for further education in free time

Benefits of working from home:

Artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive

Freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity

Drawbacks:

Lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)

2 Conclusion: inevitable trend( with self-discipline)

备注:在实战考试中无需把大纲写得如此详细,但胸有成竹一定会使之后文章的写作如鱼得水。

步骤三:文章撰写(30-35分钟)

一般文章为4-5段,平均每段用时5-10分钟

备注:建议考生在大作文写作时一定要写结论段,以体现文章的完整性。

步骤四:检查(1-2分钟)

此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。

4个雅思大作文写作技巧

雅思大作文写作技巧1、列数据(raising figures)

句型:

As is reported/ investigated/ researched, …

It is reported that …

A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that…

列数据的写作方法较讲道理更有说服力,但是这就需要我们在平时生活中多做积累才能应付列举考试中出现的各个话题的一些相关数字。

雅思考试中的数据其实可以分成两大类,一类是有科学依据的,明确记载的数据,如一些新闻事件,四川地灾、公交车自燃等的死亡或受伤人数,这些都是**询的,如若考生对这些数据没有切实的把握就不需列举。另一类是指一些调查报告的数据,如大学生平均一天花多少时间自习,初中生平均一天花多少时间玩电脑游戏等,这类数据无据可依,考生完全可以自己根据论证内容给出数据,但一定要符合逻辑。我们通过一例来使用列数据的雅思写作方法:

Eg.The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

要对这样一个topic sentence做列数据的扩展,我们首先要找到可列数据的点,此题有两处,一是退休老人的年龄,二是所花时间。结合上述句型,得出论证过程如下:

As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day.

雅思大作文写作技巧2、比较(contrast &comparison)

在雅思大作文的写作中,考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比较,相同关系叫对照(comparison),相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词:

In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas

Likewise, similarly

雅思大作文写作技巧3、引用(quotation)

在雅思大作文写作论证的过程中,表达一些观点的时候,如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力,说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致,形成共鸣的。但引用要求考生要有相当大的积累,由于备考时间紧迫,此类论证可以少用。此外,老师提醒考生要紧记,引用名人名言就意味着引用别人的观点,所以只要引两到三句起到论证自己观点的作用的话就可以了,点到为止,而不是中文写作中,引用越多越好。

雅思大作文写作技巧4、让步(making concession)

让步的论证是中国考生较陌生的一个概念,其实在学状语从句时,我们就学过让步的关系,先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实,再转折给出自己的观点,否定前者。句型如下:

Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that …

As is granted/ Admittedly, …

Opponents would argue that …

举个简单的例子,一个男生向女生告白,被女生拒绝,她就会委婉的用让步的论证来表达自己的想法,她会先承认男生的一些优点,再转折说自己并不喜欢他。这样既能表达自己的观点,又不至于伤害对方。让步这种方法的优点为能较全面的看待一个问题,而且反驳更能有的放矢。具体例子如下:

Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.

这个Topic sentence的观点很明确,存钱在当代社会不是好主意,显然,用让步论证的话,我们要先承认存钱的优点,再根据所列有点进行反驳。

As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits.

雅思大作文开头写作方法介绍

雅思作文开头当中比较常规的写法是在开头段的开始对议论文的话题作背景陈述,通常是大致介绍雅思作文考题中所涉及的事物或行为在当今社会的总体情况或特征。这种写作方式中规中矩,非常常见,但是一看就是千篇一律,非常容易给人以模板话地印象,很难表现出个性化色彩。

这样的雅思作文开头导致很多文章总是在用" Nowadays... "、" With the development of..."等套句,甚至于让考官一看就知道是从模板抽出来的。

雅思作文开头写作当中最重要的技巧就是要有个性化的表达,个性化的表达可以使文章的背景介绍与自己的亲身经历相结合,使文章变得更为鲜活,开头段便显得与众不同,引起考官的注意。下面来看一个例子:

People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not asfit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest somemeasures to solve this problem.

个性化引言段

I keep on nodding in agreement when seeing the background information ofthe question. I myself have always been struggling not to be overweight.Unfortunately, like most others, I failed. As to why people nowadays are not asfit and active as they were, various factors can be identified.

从上面的例子当中我们可以看到,一个好的开头段对雅思作文写作的作用不言而喻,所以大家在准备自己的雅思作文开头写作的时候,一定要记得要让自己的开头更加的个性化,这样才能更加的突出。

雅思大作文展开议论的三种方式

无论雅思托福的议论文写作,都需要对论点进行充分详细的论述,下面的文章,我们就来看一看雅思写作议论文段落的3中展开方法。

在应试型(雅思或新托福等)议论文写作中,通常遵循introduction-body-conclusion(引言段-主体段-结论段)的“三步曲”。Body(主体)段落提供了论证观点的理由,是整个文章的主体,在评分中占有很大的比重。例如一篇满分的雅思作文(9分)必须“presentsa fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fullyextended and well supported ideas”。这里的“fully extended / wellsupported”,必须通过主体段来体现。新托福的满分作文(5分)也要求“is well organized and well developed,using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/ordetails”,同样必须通过主体段落发展来实现。

一般来说,一篇议论文必须包含至少两个主体段。每个主体段都必须有明确的主题句“topic sentence”和若干支持句“supportingsentences”。他们共同组成文章的理由段,对全文的论点提供理由支持。建议初学者在练习议论文写作时,必须遵循理由段发展的几个简单原则,这对迅速完成理由段、构建连贯和理由充分的议论文大有帮助。这几个简单原则包括:

1. Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topicsentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraphwill be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not supportthe thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement orreconsider your topic sentences.(每个主体段都必须有一个明确的主题句)

2. Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence foreach paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideasstated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topicsentence.(支持句必须围绕主题句展开)

根据第2条的原则,我们来看看下面这个主体段:

Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational.For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about thecountries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in ahobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person canalso meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time isbeing used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get intomischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a futurejob. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is more satisfied with life.

这段话的topic sentence很明显-“Hobbies are important for manyreasons”,之后的支持句从三方面阐述hobby的重要性(first, second, third),但段中这句话"A person can alsomeet other people by going theschool"与hobby重要的原因没有关系,因此削弱了整个段落的连贯性与统一性,应该被去掉。

3. Add details. To write a more fully developed paragraph, you need to adddetails to your supporting ideas. Your details can be facts, examples, personalexperiences, or descriptions.(需要用多种方式提供细节展开段落)

根据第3条的原则,我们来看下面这个段落:

The Smithsonian Institution is worth visiting for a number of reasons. TheSmithsonian Institution comprises various museums that offer something foreveryone. These museums include the National Museum of History and Technology,the National Aeronautics and Space Museum, the National Collection of Fine Arts,the National Museum of Natural History, and several others. A person can do morethan just look at the exhibits. For example, in the insect zoo at the NationalMuseum of Natural History, anyone who so desires can handle some of theexhibits. The museums provide unforgettable experiences. In climbing through theSkylab exhibit at the National Aeronautics and Space Museum, I was able toimagine what it would be like to be an astronaut in space. Movies shown atregular intervals aid in building an appreciation of our world. In the NationalAeronautics and Space Museum, there is a theater that has a large screen. Whenthe movie is shown, it gives the viewer the feeling that he or she is in themovie itself, either floating above the Earth in a hot-air balloon or hanggliding over cliffs.

这是一个成功的主题段,请注意这段话段落细节展开的几种形式-提供事实、举例、个人经历和描述。我们把这个段落拆分后进行分析:

Topic sentence

(主题句)The Smithsonian Institution is worth visiting for a number ofreasons.

Supporting idea 1

(支持理由1)The Smithsonian Institution comprises various museums that offersomething for everyone.

Details – facts

(细节展开-提供事实)These museums include the National Museum of History andTechnology, the National Aeronautics and Space Museum, the National Collectionof Fine Arts, the National Museum of Natural History, and several others.

Supporting idea 2

(支持理由2)A person can do more than just look at the exhibits.

Details – examples

(细节展开-举例)For example, in the insect zoo at the National Museum of NaturalHistory, anyone who so desires can handle some of the exhibits.

Supporting idea 3

(支持理由3)The museums provide unforgettable experiences.

Details – personal

experience

(细节展开-个人经历)

In climbing through the Skylab exhibit at the National Aeronautics andSpace Museum, I was able to imagine what it would be like to be an astronaut inspace.

Supporting idea 4

(支持理由4)Movies shown at regular intervals aid in building an appreciation ofour world.

Details – description

(细节展开-描述)In the National Aeronautics and Space Museum, there is a theaterthat has a large screen. When the movie is shown, it gives the viewer thefeeling that he or she is in the movie itself, either floating above the Earthin a hot-air balloon or hang gliding over cliffs.

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